Hm...
You focus too much on beats together and such, you need synths and melodys to have a good song... Trust me, experiment with melodys and synths cause they will make or break a song.
Need a lil help? I'm kinda newbish myself but I got some of it down and might be able to help ya.
Contact me at fuel_f2f@hotmail.com if you want. I'm on msn regularly due to work injury leaving me with nothing to do lol
-Fuel to fking Fire-
Your staring to get it!!!
A bit more orderly this time. But layering yes is a good thing, with more patterns. I know FL doesn't have many synths but try to fiddle with them cause your really lacking synths and melodys.
I know FL lags computers pretty easy... but if you think it will sounds good then do it and then export it to see if it worked... I know its a lot of hastle and trial and error but it works.
Keep trying... your getting it slowly but steadily.
-Fuel to fking Fire-
Hm...
You have a decent thing going here. I mean, you have a lot of transitions that just seem to cut over into a diff thing. You need to work more on multiple things/melodys and synths playing at one time with some killer filler noises and beats.
One of your basslines is really sweet. I wouldn't mind getting my hand on the .flp file for this to try to make something a lil more orderly out of it and help ya with transitions... I love transitions.
Keep trying man.
-Fuel to fking Fire-
Woah
Now thats different. Just starting off huh? I was just reading old reviews on my old songs and noticed u said u were just gonna start using FL so I thought I'd come by and see how you made out...
This is interesting lol. I'm not really sure what to say about it. It's really unique. I mean, I'm not trying to say something and mean something else, its not great but its a decent attempt. Just keep working at it and good luck... I'll move up the list to your newest song to see how much improvement there was.
-Fuel to fking Fire-
SWEEEEEET
Now this I can groove to. Way to go man. You seemed to have taken a lil break but u come back and nail us with an amazing song. I'm likin this. B0UNC3 adds a new one and you do too... this is my lucky day lol
The intro was slow and kool. You brought it together really kool. Starts off really slow, then starts to start up, then everything is a lil messy and hazy and then BAM! It kicks in and it kicks in sweet. I really like this man. This is something I can really get into. Not the kinda thing I just close my eyes to and chill like trance dance and tranceual but this is something I really get into.
There is room for improvement. I'll download it and listen and analyz later and tell you my thoughts on msn as usual cause I'm too lazy to do it now. Just droping a line, or many, to show u I've seen it and its KOOL
The outro was really woah... I like the outro lol. Really kool effect. But it seemed to cut off when it shoulda faded out which was a lil disappointing.
Anyways great work, get in a few improvements and it'll kick some major ass.
-Fuel to fking Fire-
Wow
Your musical ability is A+ and your cuz's singing is wow. She has a good voice... get that girl on american idol or something heh.
Well the song is great. The beat really backs up those great vocals perfectly. I agree, this sounds like an opening for an anime heh.
Well good job! Great job! how old was she when she sang this? She sounds kinda young. Hope she keeps working on her vocals, ya never know who's listening heh.
Great job on both parts.
you're review is very inspiring. it's encouragement like this that give me all the reasons for continuing with music production. :) thanks for the review!!
Beautiful
First off:
Shael_Riley's review was absolutely perfect and moving.
I don't know what else to add to it. Just beautiful.
wow
It opens very soft. Then a pause and slight build, its starting to feel uplifting. It gets more and more uplifting as it goes. This is portraying a beautiful feeling. It never really gets fast but its so beautiful.
The strings are a nice effect. It adds that lil extra to give it a better mood. Wow.
Your ability for creating mood setting pieces are great man. Keep these coming. I'll def have to play some of these for my gf when she comes to visit me. :D
Thanks for the beautiful music.
Looking forward to your newest works.
Nicely done my friend
I had lost your bookmark when I formated but I forgot u were on my msn lol. And the address for ur music was in the name so here I am.
It's a good song. I guess its hiphop. Not really something I could see in that genre but I wouldn't know what cat to put this in. Anyways I think its really well done. I like ur style, and the fact that u use a keyboard makes it even more impressive.
You should try a trance beat sometime. I curious as to how it would sound, you have a good style to make decent ambient/trance style tracks. I'm just curious tho heh.
This is kool. I really enjoy chillin to this song.
Keep up the great work. I'll work my way up to ur newest stuff now :D
Nice lil loop
You know where I stand on really short loops. PET PEEVE. So I'll be very unbiased now.
its got a really kool feeling to it. It makes a somewhat sad feeling but kinda happy at the same time. Perhaps the feeling of things are about to change and the world is not such a cruel and harsh place, and your life is gonna get better. So I guess... its really uplifting. An amazing feeling to create. Shame its so short. I'd even be a lil happier to have it play 2X longer as the exact same because it doesn't loop properly(which is where u lost clarity points) Sorry the song is perfectly clear, but a loop is suppose to loop :(
It's a nice loop. I listened to it like 100 times before, during, and after this review.
Good Job bro, keep em coming.
yep i know, my bad on that one, shouldhave checked it b4 i submitted
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