MASTERING
Mastering is what makes or breaks a great song. This isn't great, but yes, its quite good. But theres a massive need to master this song... Too much crackling and distortion.
Sorry for not making a really constructive review, cause mastering is the most needed thing here.
Wow
Dude I'm impressed.
Well it starts off really upbeat and pretty fun. I mean, its a really different/original thing.
Then it drops out and this massive low freq bass comes. *Drool*
Now your old evil trance style comes in and then again transforms into another different song.
Geez dude... theres so many different styles in this song its kool. Its like your showing off your many talents in one song ;)
It's not one of my fav's as something I'd listen to all the time, but as far as the song goes, its a masterpeice and VERY deserving of a VERY high rating. Good job!
lol you will always be my best and favorite fan.
This song is nothing compared to my new stuff tho!
Nice
I kinda went backwards on your music and started from newest to oldest.
In a short time you've improved but even from the start you come out impressively strong.
This song, like your others, differ from that which is generally uploaded to NG. Which is one of the reasons I love it so much. Different is good. You've obviously got your stuff down and know what your doing. Your not going with the general flow of the site and your daring to be different, and despite it not getting the proper attention from NG listeners, your on the right path and doing it amazingly well.
If you've been a NG audio listener for a while b4 making music you'd know NG artists are generally the only reviewers/voters so they vote low on the best stuff right away so they don't have to compete with it. Which is why NG is such a poor place to start. Try going to other sites AS WELL. Don't get me wrong, NG kinda sucks for its voting but you WILL get some good help/crit here. So don't ignore this place totally.
I've went on long enough. This song kicks ass. Thats all I can really say. I'm sure you don't need me to break it down for you. Amazing job. A lot of time well spent.
Good luck in future projects!
Different
And different is good!
This song immediately sets itself apart from nearly any other type of song I hear getting on NG. This is some good stuff.
I wroste u an amazingly long review and my comp crashed, so I'll make this one short and to the point.
NG is a decent starting point, but not a good enough place for this quality of music. Look for bigger and better sites. Garageband.com run/operated in part by Ex-Beatles producer Sir George Martin is one. That site gets people record deals ;)
This song is an amazing peice of work and extraordinarily different which is what will make it be so popular if everyone can see it for what it is, a masterpeice.
I love the panning btw. Wow!
Fun
This is a pretty uplifting fun song, yet its still pretty slow and trancey which makes it VERY kool in its own right.
Now this is a pretty different song compared to what we're used to seeing on NG. And that is, this ACTUALLY sounds like it took more than a few days. I mean, this seems like an actual song, a real project. And it sounds pro.
But what out. On NG, if its good, and on top of the ratings people bomb it 0 to get it out of the way fast cause they don't wanna compete with it. Thats why NG is a bad place to have your music. I suggest you look for other sites right away.
NG is good for crit and getting your stuff heard, and a free web host. But try looking for other sites like garageband.com which is run/operated partly by Ex-Beatles producer Sir George Martin. That site actually gets people noticed by the industry and gets artists signed. You'll learn a lot there, and from other sites/artists you get into contact with.
You have great potential. I wish you the best of luck in your musical career should you choose to pursue it!
Hey, thank you. you are very helpful. Im actually surprised that someone would take there time to write this much about my song. But what your saying is true. some people on newgrounds dont respect the music that gets put on here. I think I will take you advice by putting my music more diversly spread throughout the internet. Thanks for the review.
Later fuel2fire.
-XON3-
Wow
I wanna do a real crit on one of your songs but every time I try to find something wrong with it I just get caught up in the mood of the song and can't even try to begin asking you to change it.
All your works are just so moving and beautiful.
I wish you all the best of luck in your life and hope to see, well hear, more from you soon(er than later).
spiritual
This is so beautiful man. I'm having troubles thinking of how to reply to this piece. Wow... I can't really express the feelings I get from this song... Sometimes its sad but at others its so uplifting and spiritual. It's simply an amazing piece.
This has more feeling than likely anything I've heard in my life. I can't stop listening. This isn't even my kind of music really but its just so beautiful and meaningful that I don't want it to stop.
Keep up the amazing work.
Thanks man... I haven't written anything in a while... but seeing as I just lost the love of my life... again... I'm sure I can find plenty of frustration to take out on my keyboard.
Wow
Your using a keyboard and producing more pro sounding stuff than some people who use complex programs lol
This is pretty sweet man. And one of the most origional sounding trance/techno songs I've seen around in a while. It's not complex but its not really simple either... its beautiful man. You always put an awesome touch to any project you do and each time you blow me away.
This is a great song!
Not bad
Really simple piano loop... the only problem... the intro and the actual "song" don't fit together, and theres no transition... put a transition in there so its smooth sounding and it would be a beautiful lil track!
COMPRESSION!!!
Dude I notice RIGHT AWAY clipping in your music... your making it go way above its limit... you need to learn how to use compressors.
I'm just gonna go ahead and say your using Fruity Loops. Dunno which version. But anyways, when u play music in FL, look at a double EQ style thing that has "Monitor" beside it... if either of the 2 bars go really far and turn red its way too much and you need to compress.
Now this song is pretty nice, since its ur first song you've submitted I'd say its a really great start! But you have to keep the clipping down!
Also I noticed you have 26 song's in less than a month... dude! Take it easy!!! Take the time to edit ur stuff and make sure its 100% perfect for what u want. For 1, people will like that you've taken the time to make it as good as possible and 2, if you continue at this rate people will turn a blind eye on you and consider you a newbie uploading every single thing u make... Just yesterday you submitted 5 times. Not saying u made them all yesterday but 26 songs in less than a month is too much!
Most people upload once every few days if they don't work on a project for very long. You need to step away from the comp for a while and come in and spend some time on your song here and there for a few days, and listen to some of your CD's and files in between. This will give you good ideas and help you see things u never saw in the first place. Trust me... taking some time away from making the song can be as productive as sitting their fiddling with it for hours.
Wow this is getting long. So yea, COMPRESS!!!
Good song too :D
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